couple of abstract poems Options

[Heathasm]

"tea time"

It's tea time, Honey, on this virginal gauze
Covered in a liquid stick
Bolting down the urn with my mother's ashes in it
They dye the plate and silverware to stone
While in the process
Of rebirth
From a single spec of whim
And salty sunflower seeds we had
While drinking tea at tea time, Honey

"Untitled"

Crepe painted rocks scrape a seedless lore
To hardened holes, like the dark marias, penetrating the air
Feinted eras erase, through mountains of pale white tips dipped in snow
Phones-losing their sweet connections 'cause this zone is dead
Like the traffic downtown-blurring, 'cause its so damn hot this summer

I saw a pretty girl step out from the heated rays,
Covered in sparkling diamond-like crystals,
Crystals known of now, but never acknowledged by men;
I tell her:
"Take in your hand and faith this soft petal's rose
Embedded so pleasantly on the surface of your skin;
Take this dog-footed being, and burry the seeds deep within"

I can't get out of my car and just walk to her
But I see, and that's all I need for now
I could reach her if I could fly
With my arms, into hers, and away
From the whole artistic scene growing in the air these days

[TheSilenceInDict...]

I saw the topic title and freaked.

LoL, I label my writing 'Abstract writing.' Coincidentally enough, the work you posted is very similar to my usual style of writing.

Well done work.

[Heathasm]

I saw the topic title and freaked.

LoL, I label my writing 'Abstract writing.' Coincidentally enough, the work you posted is very similar to my usual style of writing.

Well done work.

thanks....i havent seen any of your stuff yet i dont think.. id like to though

[TheSilenceInDict...]

I've been swamped with stuff to do, but I'll be posting a lot of new work soon, as well as some old.

I've post a few things here, check them out if you'd like.

• Still Lost
  
• An old but favorite piece of mine
  
• 8th grade poem #1
  
• 8th grade poem #2
  
• 1st two pieces I posted
  
• Only love piece I've written
  
• High school friendships

[//.EDIT] Added a new one that I just posted ('An old but favorite...')