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Art Critique please, -Nothing rude
Joanne
post Jul 20 2009, 03:20 AM
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.... they're guys?
 
Blyat
post Jul 20 2009, 10:30 PM
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QUOTE(Joanne @ Jul 20 2009, 04:20 AM) *
.... they're guys?


lol yeah, I was getting this Idea from a group of art friends on Deviant-Art :3
 
AncientWhisper
post Jul 30 2009, 01:32 PM
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Ohh, lovely to see an anime/manga artist here. :3

I think you need to work on your anatomy a bit more. What bothered me most was the chin and how flat the face looked. :< The necks are still a bit too long in the sense that it looks like they're missing that muscle between the neck and the shoulders; the neck should be less straight down on both characters. (sorry I don't know anatomy when it comes to terminology). But if it's your style, there's no to need to fix if you don't want to. x]

Otherwise, I see great potential. I love the pastel-type coloring style you have and the artstyle overall. It has a soft appealing to it and the people have nice slender features. thumbsup.gif Wonderful job!
 

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