my love poem Options

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

we both sit next to each other in the still of the night
saying these words everything will be alright
the moon shined down on us there was a sparkle in your eye
it was tears falling down your face you started to cry
i held u tight to be next to you
telling the whole world how much i love you
u smiled back at me with that look on ur face
i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place
its hard for me to explain cuz i love u so much
but its that kinda love no one can touch
i promise someday it will be me and you
till then im always loving you

i like writing but i dunno why i cant write an essay or get good grades in english geez lol

[TheSilenceInDict...]

Ah, yet another love poem....

For one, Welcome to the forums.

Two, the reason why you don't do well with essays and whatnot may be because it's controlled - there are guidelines to follow. With your own writing, there aren't any boundaries, and it's your own emotions being translated into pen on paper. You're more comfortable with it, and the writing flows through much easier.

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

hehe thnx for advice man ima use it

[rainnydaiis]

master is ruler of writing +P

haha nice one loved it

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

thnx yeh he got a point i dont very much use the guidelines im more of a free kinda writer person like write stuff outta mah head

[rainnydaiis]

same i hate writing to a like guideline.. like 8 sentences per paragraph... who the heck cares its your writing =P

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

lol yeah i agree with you on that i hate rules to writing

[rainnydaiis]

omg thank god sometimes when we free write for poems... NO PERIODS!!!! RAWR

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

LMAO yes well heres another poem


hmm a poem outta the blue

i opened my eyes and started to see
i realized what a person i came out to be
im sorry if things didnt go our way
no matter what i did u still drifted away
i thought i could finally see the right road to take
but everything fell down and it started to break
now i fall down and beg on my knees
just another chance before you leave
how much i need you to hold and to love
just to let everyone know your my angel, the gift from above

[rainnydaiis]

oo was that a quickie?

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

yep a quickie

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

another poem enjoy

why do i pretend its all okay
is it because i ran out of the words to say
why do i choke at the site of your name
is it me or are u feeling the same
why do i feel like i have to cry
is it because i still wanna try
why do i still feel so much pain
is it because i lost u and i have nothing to gain
why am i feeling so down and gone away
is it because i still think of you everyday
why do i feel that theres something u should know
is it becuase i still havent let you go
why cant i realize that your already gone
its cuz im still feeling for you and im holding on

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

poem fantic srry

i thought it was right to be with you
i guess everything messed up when i said i love you
now we dont talk and met our seperate ways
the feeling is dead,its gone, it died away
i thought i gave up cuz i lost you
its just we had our own problems and didnt make it through
i wont say it was wasted love that we had
its just the decisions i made u didnt like and it all went bad
u started to hate me for just one thing
when i broke your heart u hated everything
i never intended to make u feel that way
i tried hard and hard to make evrything stay
now my trying didnt go so well
it ended up in chaos and sent me through hell
but all that stuff is all in the past
ill remember everything even what happened last
when u moved on i couldnt handle the pain
this is how i put it the way i would explain

[rainnydaiis]

lolz nice poems but just make new topics for each!!!!!
tripple post uh OH!!

[TheSilenceInDict...]

Haha, Thanks for the comment about me being the 'ruler of writing.' I'm flattered.

Boy, you two should be getting along pretty well - Both of you write based on similar subjects.

I've only posted ONE piece related to love. Most likely the last one as well. Here's the link for 'dispn0y'...I know you've already seen this one, rainnydaiis...

My only love piece

[*wind&fire*]

"i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place"
not that im a critic or sumthin but i think that line has to many syalbles(sp) it disrupts the flow.... but i love your poems!!!!

[pinksparkliefire]

this is my love poem.......

I think about your face,
And how I fall into your eyes
The outline that I trace
Around the one that I call mine
Time that called for space
Unclear where you drew the line
I don't need to solve this case
And I don't need to look behind

Close my eyes
Let the whole thing pass me by
There is no time
To waste asking why

So I'll run away with you by my side
I need to let go of this pride
Until this echo in my mind

Before this echo can subside
Do I expect to change
The past I hold inside
With all the words I say
Repeating over in my mind
Some things you can't erase
No matter how hard you try
An exit to escape
Is all there is left to find

[pinksparkliefire]

heres another one......

I asked him if he likes me, he said no.
I asked him if he thinks im pretty, he said no.
I asked him if he would cry if i walked away, he said no.
So i turned around and he grabbed my arm and said,
"I don't like you, I love you."
"You're not pretty, you're beautiful."
"I wouldn't die if you walked away, I would die."

[Heathasm]

heres another one......

I asked him if he likes me, he said no.
I asked him if he thinks im pretty, he said no.
I asked him if he would cry if i walked away, he said no.
So i turned around and he grabbed my arm and said,
"I don't like you, I love you."
"You're not pretty, you're beautiful."
"I wouldn't die if you walked away, I would die."

this one isn't yours...next time you should credit the author

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

true i heard the same b4 too

[TheSilenceInDict...]

Makes me question whether or not the first one you posted is in fact yours.

[j x tEARz]

Nice poem~