my love poem |
 Sep 24 2004, 03:26 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
we both sit next to each other in the still of the night
saying these words everything will be alright the moon shined down on us there was a sparkle in your eye it was tears falling down your face you started to cry i held u tight to be next to you telling the whole world how much i love you u smiled back at me with that look on ur face i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place its hard for me to explain cuz i love u so much but its that kinda love no one can touch i promise someday it will be me and you till then im always loving you i like writing but i dunno why i cant write an essay or get good grades in english geez lol |
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Sep 24 2004, 05:06 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Haha, Thanks for the comment about me being the 'ruler of writing.' I'm flattered.
Boy, you two should be getting along pretty well - Both of you write based on similar subjects. I've only posted ONE piece related to love. Most likely the last one as well. Here's the link for 'dispn0y'...I know you've already seen this one, rainnydaiis... My only love piece |
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dispn0ygonekrazy my love poem Sep 24 2004, 03:26 PM
MasteRxKiD Ah, yet another love poem....
For one, Welcome to... Sep 24 2004, 03:47 PM dispn0ygonekrazy hehe thnx for advice man ima use it Sep 24 2004, 03:54 PM rainnydaiis master is ruler of writing +P
haha nice one loved... Sep 24 2004, 03:57 PM dispn0ygonekrazy thnx yeh he got a point i dont very much use the g... Sep 24 2004, 04:07 PM rainnydaiis same i hate writing to a like guideline.. like 8 s... Sep 24 2004, 04:09 PM dispn0ygonekrazy lol yeah i agree with you on that i hate rules to ... Sep 24 2004, 04:10 PM rainnydaiis omg thank god sometimes when we free write for poe... Sep 24 2004, 04:11 PM dispn0ygonekrazy LMAO yes well heres another poem
hmm a poem out... Sep 24 2004, 04:12 PM rainnydaiis oo was that a quickie? Sep 24 2004, 04:13 PM dispn0ygonekrazy yep a quickie Sep 24 2004, 04:15 PM dispn0ygonekrazy another poem enjoy
why do i pretend its all okay
... Sep 24 2004, 04:21 PM dispn0ygonekrazy poem fantic srry
i thought it was right to be wit... Sep 24 2004, 04:23 PM rainnydaiis lolz nice poems but just make new topics for each... Sep 24 2004, 04:24 PM wind&fire "i told u baybee no one can ever take yur pla... Sep 27 2004, 03:25 AM pinksparkliefire this is my love poem.......
I think about your fa... Sep 27 2004, 04:26 PM pinksparkliefire heres another one......
I asked him if he likes m... Sep 27 2004, 04:30 PM Heathasm QUOTE(pinksparkliefire @ Sep 27 2004, 4:30 PM... Sep 27 2004, 06:03 PM dispn0ygonekrazy true i heard the same b4 too Sep 27 2004, 06:18 PM MasteRxKiD Makes me question whether or not the first one you... Sep 27 2004, 11:05 PM
j x tEARz Nice poem~ Sep 30 2004, 02:19 PM |
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