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my first love
ryfitaDF
post Aug 13 2005, 10:21 PM
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the title really has nothing to do with the song. think of As i Lay dying: elegy mixed with underoath: alone this december.

MY FIRST LOVE
I don’t know what I would do if I saw you tonight
I might hug you, I might hate you, or I just might die
All I know is I can’t elude you asleep or awake
Let’s just say I’ve, let’s just say I’ve learned from my mistakes

I’ve been in love; I’ve been in hate with you
I don’t know which is worse
I’ve been in love; I’ve been in hate with you
No matter what, it’s going to hurt

There have been times late in the night where I cannot sleep
So many stories wake memories I can’t help but reap
All I know is I can’t elude you asleep or awake
Let’s just say I’ve, Let’s just say I’ve learned from my mistakes

I’ve been in love; I’ve been in hate with you
I don’t know which is worse
I’ve been in love; I’ve been in hate with you
No matter what, it’s going to hurt

Kill the lights instead of me, please. Execute your will
From the tallest heights to the deepest valley, Infinity to nil
Just a blink com-pared to the heart-beats reserved for you
All I know is I am damned if I don’t. Damned if I do

I’ve been in love; I’ve been in hate with you
I don’t know which is worse
I’ve been in love; I’ve been in hate with you
No matter what, it’s going to hurt
 
 
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*torngemini*
post Aug 14 2005, 09:23 PM
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wow that's powerful! I like it! It's a strange feeling isn't it? that Love/Hate feeling?

I always ask myself ... how can you hate someone so much but love them like you can't live without them sometimes? It's strange but it's true. That's what Love does to you!
 
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post Aug 15 2005, 07:53 PM
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*grins*

This one's really good, and I agree with the person above me.

"Kill the lights instead of me, please. Execute your will
From the tallest heights to the deepest valley, Infinity to nil
Just a blink com-pared to the heart-beats reserved for you
All I know is I am damned if I don’t. Damned if I do"

^ I think that was the best part.... excellently done. _smile.gif
 

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