Dark Touch, by Sythdude |
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 Jul 24 2005, 03:44 AM
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 Tight Pants | Romance | Let's Dance  Group: Member Posts: 73 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 137,066  |
[Dark Touch]
Oh what a wonderful candy you are. I love to look at you, the way you tease me with your appearence. I feel as if I'm invisible. I could stare at you all day long and you wouldn't see a thing. I bet your flavor is sour apple, painful at first but warm and succulent on the latter half of my visit. Wanting you so bad, your beautiful smile and your insensitive front. I can hear the cellos playing, the soft melody you protrude in times when you're real. When dark comes I think of how you would look if I couldn't see you. You touching my thigh and I envision of our love under my sheets. The way you'd lick my ear, kiss my neck so that I melt. I need your arms around me, comfort me and whisper into my ear. My only wish is to rest in your dreams, to love your closed eyes. When the thoughts roll by, I see us in passion and lust. Noone understands. Bite my neck once more. You don't even know I love you. Saturday, July 23rd by Charles V. |
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Jul 24 2005, 11:06 AM
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 cellophane chests? Group: Member Posts: 488 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,816 |
it's decent. Is it a song or a poem? if it's not a song, it reads like one...a sad, scream-y ballad of sorts.
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Jul 24 2005, 03:42 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Beautiful. I love the imagery and everything. It's so passionate. I love it. It gives me a warm sense of peace and longing.
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Jul 25 2005, 04:58 PM
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 Seeker of Salvation Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,068 |
i like it.
so true. it reminds me of a friend. |
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Jul 26 2005, 02:25 AM
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very well written. fabulous imagery and words...keep up the amazing work. i quite liked this.
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