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a short poem
racoons > you
post Jul 7 2005, 05:41 AM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving
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nineteen dreams for a weaver
looms spinning endless threads together
hope joy and despair intertwine
tangle
overlap
a pattern emerges and dissipates
bolts of cloth of colours bright and bold
fade to dull blacks and greys by the end
a silken family tree
roots in brightness
leaves in death
form death comes light
patterns of light to dark to light to dark
to light
 
 
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RiddleMeWonders
post Jul 7 2005, 05:44 AM
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fell in love with a boy
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QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Jul 7 2005, 5:41 AM)
nineteen dreams for a weaver
looms spinning endless threads together
hope joy and despair intertwine
tangle
overlap
a pattern emerges and dissipates
bolts of cloth of colours bright and bold
fade to dull blacks and greys by the end
a silken family tree
roots in brightness
leaves in death
form death comes light
patterns of light to dark to light to dark
to light
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You could be an angel.
 
*stephinika*
post Jul 7 2005, 02:47 PM
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i love this one...in a way i feel i can almost relate to what its saying...i think. great work james. thumbsup.gif
 
[Deep]Thought63
post Jul 9 2005, 12:08 AM
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sounds angelic.
 

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