Vines of Beauty, [poem] |
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 Jul 7 2005, 10:09 PM
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 ...who created this mess...?  Group: Member Posts: 451 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 97,244  |
Vines of Beauty
The eternal dying light Of bloody vines of beauty, Call forth to the time and height, The colors fulfilling their duty. A wonder to the touch of its eyes, A firm holding to its resonating voice, Controlling and manipulating breath of the known, Concludes to fiery beauty; an intsturment of its own. The black screen is decorated, A core explodes with ravaging power And a forgotten reflex is built, Leaving a neon path behind. It persuades the wind to captivate humans. The next one isn't merely a semblence, But a veil of inalienable light, Searching for a resemblance. So, can you guess what I'm talking about? |
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Jul 7 2005, 10:46 PM
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 The Lost Dreamer Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 166,502 |
QUOTE(xblueradiance @ Jul 7 2005, 8:09 PM) Vines of Beauty The eternal dying light Of bloody vines of beauty, Call forth to the time and height, The colors fulfilling their duty. A wonder to the touch of its eyes, A firm holding to its resonating voice, Controlling and manipulating breath of the known, Concludes to fiery beauty; an intsturment of its own. The black screen is decorated, A core explodes with ravaging power And a forgotten reflex is built, Leaving a neon path behind. It persuades the wind to captivate humans. The next one isn't merely a semblence, But a veil of inalienable light, Searching for a resemblance. So, can you guess what I'm talking about?  It is very beautiful. Upon reading it numerous times. I have come to the conclusiont that it is about TV or a Computer Screen. |
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Jul 7 2005, 10:51 PM
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 d@niel Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
i agree with Musouka. your poem is lovely...it is a great piece of poetry...great job!
 keep up the good work...thanks for sharing.
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Jul 8 2005, 04:53 PM
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...who created this mess...? Group: Member Posts: 451 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 97,244 |
QUOTE(Musouka @ Jul 7 2005, 11:46 PM) It is very beautiful. Upon reading it numerous times. I have come to the conclusiont that it is about TV or a Computer Screen. Thanks! ^_^ It's about fireworks, though.  Thank you for the comments, guys. |
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Jul 8 2005, 10:43 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Wow, one of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read. And it makes a lot more sense after knowing it's about fireworks. Great job! I'd love to hear more from you.
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Jul 8 2005, 11:54 PM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
very exquisite.
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