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this is me., vexel of mi amiga
>>radiant
post Jul 2 2005, 05:29 PM
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yay for hugs :)
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WOW i feel like ihavent submitted anything to createblog in a LOOONG time well i just finished a vexel so i thought i'd share it biggrin.gif

it's of my friend jen

here's the original:

(click on it to make it bigger)


and here's what i came up with



constructive critisism please happy.gif
 
YourSuperior
post Jul 2 2005, 05:43 PM
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;)
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That is good, but I just don't like the skin tone color. Try making it a little bit more brighter with normal skin tones. Good Job though! thumbsup.gif
 
technicolour
post Jul 2 2005, 05:47 PM
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I think that it just needs some shading. the face looks flat. Shade it maybe?

It still looks great though! _smile.gif
 
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post Jul 2 2005, 05:47 PM
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Wow thats really well down . i like it how it is. seems like a very hard picture to vexel/vector well any ways great job.thumbsup.gif
 
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post Jul 2 2005, 06:01 PM
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Food.
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Everything is great except for the skin color. You should add some shading or something because the hand blends in a bit with the face and I couldn't seem to figure where the finger was in front of the face.
But other than that, I really like it.. excellent job.
 
leifiram
post Jul 3 2005, 02:18 PM
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Oooh, that's pretty. Good job! Although...her index finger seems to blend in too much with her face. Maybe add some shading to her hair? Good job, none-the-less.
 
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post Jul 4 2005, 07:42 PM
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its nice but im not too fond of the skin tone ><
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 12:02 PM
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It's ok. I like it.

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seriouslynikki
post Jul 7 2005, 12:54 PM
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something more
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ooh! I like it.
 
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post Jul 7 2005, 04:21 PM
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I think you should put a shadow or something between her face and fingers and more contrast in her skin tone. Other than that, it's really pretty, I like the simplicity.
 
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post Jul 7 2005, 04:51 PM
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not bad, but yeah perhaps a bit more shading and whatnot? its pretty good though, keep up the good work! _smile.gif
 

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