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 Jun 29 2005, 03:20 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
YOU’RE HIS PROBLEM NOW
You’re his problem now He stole from me my one and only She left me tattered, torn, and lonely Deprived from all I’ve ever wanted This was our haunt, now it’s just haunted I used to write her serenades In this palace of ruin we created She handed me a hand grenade And instructed me to count to eight She grabbed me by an open wound And poured the salt of someone new As she expected me to burn I felt as though the tables turned One boy’s scar is another boy’s tragic Fatal accident waiting to happen You’re his problem now One boy’s story of his heart breaking Is another boy’s sequel to it in the making You’re his problem now I strapped myself in for the hurt And felt as thought he lifted a curse Instead of being crushed under a boulder A ton of bricks were lifted from my shoulders Expected the stings of a thousand thorns But the one that I had isn’t there anymore No more tears falling to the floor The sun shined through the window as you walked out the door Lifted from me this awful burden The drama’s over. Draw the curtain I hear all about how she loves this new guy But I don’t get mad. I sympathize with him One boy’s scar is another boy’s tragic Fatal accident waiting to happen You’re his problem now One boy’s story of his heart breaking Is another boy’s sequel to it in the making You’re his problem now Sucks to be you, man One boy’s scar is another boy’s tragic Fatal accident waiting to happen You’re his problem now One boy’s story of his heart breaking Is another boy’s sequel to it in the making You’re his problem now One boy’s scar is another boy’s tragic (A piece of information from a) Fatal accident waiting to happen (wounded matador) You’re his problem now (If you mess with her bull You will feel her horns) One boy’s story of his heart breaking (A piece of information from a) Is another boy’s sequel to it in the making (wounded matador) You’re his problem now If you mess with her bull You will feel her horns) |
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| *wind&fire* |
Jun 29 2005, 03:23 AM
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OH THE PAIN!!!! TTTHHHEEE PPPAAAAIIIIINNNNN!!!!!!!!
good job... its been awhile |
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Jun 29 2005, 04:32 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Wow that was amazing...really it was.
I love this line right here... "She grabbed me by an open wound And poured the salt of someone new" lol wow def felt that before. The poem was really amazing tho, full of emotion, and a wonderful choice of words. You've got major talent. Keep writing :) It's a must |
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| *stephinika* |
Jun 29 2005, 02:42 PM
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i agree with katie. this is awesome...seriously. i love the whole idea and just the words you used and everything. amazing work.
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Jun 29 2005, 03:47 PM
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 Lauren loves YOU. Group: Member Posts: 2,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,793 |
that was awesome. i liked the line that was previously mentioned about the open wound and i also enjoyed the bull and matador reference in the end.
don't stop writing! that was really amazing. |
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Jun 29 2005, 04:09 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Woooo! This is amazing!
I LOVE it. Excellent, excellent job, as always. I really love this one... just wow. Wonderful job. You're too good. :P |
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Jun 30 2005, 12:49 AM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
thanks everyone! you're too kind. i had to hurry and write this one cause we're recording our e.p. (for real this time) in a week or so. you'll all be able to hear it after that. =]
brie... do you just copy and paste your replys from my other songs? hehehe. |
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| *Azarel* |
Jun 30 2005, 12:52 AM
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Mm, great lyrics. I look forward to listening to the song.
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Jul 1 2005, 10:48 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jun 30 2005, 12:49 AM) brie... do you just copy and paste your replys from my other songs? hehehe.  Nah, I just never know how else to say it. I love everything you've ever posted, so I guess my comments get a bit repetitive. Sorry.. 
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Jul 9 2005, 01:34 AM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
very productive.
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