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crimson tears
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post Jul 9 2005, 02:37 AM
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raindrops trickle, quickly from the skies,
they mingle with the teardrops, falling from my eyes .
i turn my face towards heaven and i shout out one word, " WHY? "
but my voice is muffled from my urgent need to cry .
i wiped away a tear and i looked into his face,
a slight suprised frown had taken his grin's place .
i looked into his eyes, and they seemed to glare back at me .
i shake my head, because i dont believe what i see .
just one moment ago life was perfect, i was close inside his arms,
when we were with each other, it seemed like life could do no harm .
i can still his loving words, being whispered in my ear,
the very words that made me smile, erasing all my fears .
and then that blissful kiss that glued me to the ground .
then out of nowhere, came that earth-shattering sound .
--BANG BANG--
my lover fell, he'd been shot,
with one last breathe, with all he got,
he told me, i was his everything,
and from his pocket came a diamond ring .
'' i thought we could live forever together, just like we said,
i'm so sorry this happened instead ''
then, instead of words, from his mouth poured blood,
and my tears mingled with his crimson created a vast flood .
 

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lidoxangie   crimson tears   Jul 9 2005, 02:37 AM
cazilika   wow, very sad. very discriptive. nice job!   Jul 11 2005, 09:21 AM


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