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Double Take, you know who you are
*CrackedRearView*
post Jun 13 2005, 10:47 PM
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I am walking while birds are talking,
While thoughts of you flow so,
Briskly through my veins…
Take two looks at me,
Double take, you see?
What’s this penchant you’ve,
Chained tightly to me?

When the trepidation’s gone, will you be there?
Vivacity elsewhere, exhilaration away…
When the initial brush of lips is done,
You’ll be right here, I pray…

Double take once more as I move on,
The first night’s come and past,
Now the hurdle’s here…
When your hands met mine, so,
Transcendental, such,
Superhuman grace…
Unremitting love…

When the trepidation’s gone, will you be there?
Vivacity elsewhere, exhilaration away…
When the initial brush of lips is done,
You’ll be right here, I pray…

Final double take, once for good measure,
Over my shoulder, your eyes laser mine,
It sends quivers down my spine…
Take your time, darling,
There’s no urgency,
Just two fools in love,
To make beautiful mistakes…

When the trepidation’s gone, will you be there?
Vivacity elsewhere, exhilaration away…
When the initial brush of lips is done,
You’ll be right here, I pray…
 

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CrackedRearView   Double Take   Jun 13 2005, 10:47 PM
stephinika   beautiful. absolutely beautiful. your use of words...   Jun 14 2005, 08:05 AM
Azarel   You have a way with words, my love, you really do....   Jun 14 2005, 09:40 AM
HiddenSmile   Very nice.   Jun 14 2005, 11:48 AM
HiddenSmile   Whoops, accidentall posted twice, nice vocabulary ...   Jun 14 2005, 11:48 AM


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