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About A Girl, poem
HiddenSmile
post Jun 13 2005, 05:03 PM
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She steps and spring springs from her step.
As soon as I saw her my heart lept.
The most beautiful thing I'd ever saw,
That type of beauty should be against the law.
I'd seen girls before, but none like this,
I just hope I don't get totally dissed.
I stutter when I talk o her. _unsure.gif
Eveyrone else just becomes a blure.
Her hair flows like a dark brown sea,
Her eyes so bright I can barely see. biggrin.gif
Should I ask her to the dance or not?
She sure seems to like that other guy alot.
I'm just worried that she'll say no, cry.gif
Well, here I go!


Hope you guys like this!!! (I <3 poetry!!!)
 

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HiddenSmile   About A Girl   Jun 13 2005, 05:03 PM
Paradox of Life   I like it. It flows well and it's really cute....   Jun 13 2005, 06:02 PM
azn_r4pf4n   heh. nice poem, reminds me of how im feeling now.   Jun 13 2005, 06:31 PM
mipadi   Off topic, but the title, "About a Girl,...   Jun 13 2005, 07:00 PM
gotblog4me?   Wow, thats good I like it!   Jun 13 2005, 07:23 PM


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