About A Girl, poem |
About A Girl, poem |
Jun 13 2005, 05:03 PM
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vat ist dis? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 142 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 152,500 |
She steps and spring springs from her step.
As soon as I saw her my heart lept. The most beautiful thing I'd ever saw, That type of beauty should be against the law. I'd seen girls before, but none like this, I just hope I don't get totally dissed. I stutter when I talk o her. Eveyrone else just becomes a blure. Her hair flows like a dark brown sea, Her eyes so bright I can barely see. Should I ask her to the dance or not? She sure seems to like that other guy alot. I'm just worried that she'll say no, Well, here I go! Hope you guys like this!!! (I <3 poetry!!!) |
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HiddenSmile About A Girl Jun 13 2005, 05:03 PM
Paradox of Life I like it. It flows well and it's really cute.... Jun 13 2005, 06:02 PM
azn_r4pf4n heh. nice poem, reminds me of how im feeling now. Jun 13 2005, 06:31 PM
mipadi Off topic, but the title, "About a Girl,... Jun 13 2005, 07:00 PM
gotblog4me? Wow, thats good I like it! Jun 13 2005, 07:23 PM![]() ![]() |