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 Jun 18 2005, 01:08 PM
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 It feels like electricity;  Group: Member Posts: 493 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 59,331  |
 pics from vogued.nu, and made in photoshop. any comments, tips...? all are greatly appreciated! thanks for checking it out. |
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Jun 18 2005, 01:32 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 148 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,934 |
Wow, it's amazing. I love the colors. It's beautiful. Just one thing...it's a bit busy. Too many images, but overall it's great. Awesome job!
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Jun 18 2005, 01:37 PM
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It feels like electricity; Group: Member Posts: 493 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 59,331 |
yeah, it's a bit messy. i used all the images from the spread...hahah.
thanks for the criticism! |
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Jun 18 2005, 01:49 PM
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 Go to Tahiti, and make out with a native. Group: Duplicate Posts: 914 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,267 |
i agree^^
its a bit busy, but its very nice. it almost looks like a poster for a movie! |
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Jun 18 2005, 03:37 PM
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nice work! yeah, other than the busy-ness factor though, it looks great.
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Jun 18 2005, 04:47 PM
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gigi =p Group: Member Posts: 3,679 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,206 |
Yeah, it's a bit busy, but the blending's pretty good. Oh...and if that's French you're using to say "new boho", it should be "nouveau" with another U. Yeah. =\
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Jun 18 2005, 04:51 PM
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 mS diAna Group: Member Posts: 468 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,262 |
a little too busy. and the font doesn't match the theme. the red transparent text looks kind weird where it is, and the curved one doesn't look really . . . right.
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Jun 18 2005, 05:24 PM
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It feels like electricity; Group: Member Posts: 493 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 59,331 |
in response to all the comments:
that was the title of the magaine spread,so i'm not sure if i typed it incorrectly or if they did. yeah, i don't have many fonts. thanks for all the comments. next time i make a blend, i'm going to use less images, hahaha. |
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Jun 18 2005, 05:53 PM
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 NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16. Group: Member Posts: 4,616 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,577 |
I like it =]
It's a little busy with all the images, though. I like the colors. I would suggest using the title "Nouveau Boho" only once, and working on making that look nice. |
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Jun 18 2005, 07:02 PM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
That is really good, except for the lines that look drawn across the top, that kinda throws off the vibe.
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Jun 18 2005, 07:03 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 988 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 98,884 |
i think it looks alright. But still nice. I don't like how busy it is thought cause there's to many images around it. But still, it's great.
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Jun 18 2005, 07:22 PM
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gigi =p Group: Member Posts: 3,679 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,206 |
QUOTE(becomingAWARE @ Jun 18 2005, 3:24 PM) in response to all the comments: that was the title of the magaine spread,so i'm not sure if i typed it incorrectly or if they did. yeah, i don't have many fonts. thanks for all the comments. next time i make a blend, i'm going to use less images, hahaha.  I can see some of the title from the original picture in your blend (it's near the middle) and it's Nouveau. Just wanted to point that out. |
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Jun 18 2005, 07:44 PM
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It feels like electricity; Group: Member Posts: 493 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 59,331 |
yeah. i'm smart. i think i'm going to change that. and learn how totype.
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Jun 18 2005, 08:08 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
Actually, I don't really mind the busy-ness of the blend. It's just that some of the lines are visible. Some of the images should be blended just a little more. The colors are wonderful. I think it's a really good blend overall. Very well done.
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