Log In · Register

 
REPLACEMENT, poem
aznlyka
post Jun 9 2005, 01:09 AM
Post #1


Senior Member
****

Group: Member
Posts: 224
Joined: Mar 2004
Member No: 8,206



i am the loner of life that soothes the torturing burdens of dead souls.

give me you tortures.
i'll have the taste of your hurt blood be sipped through my veins.
i'll take away your pain.
i'll sacrafice my health.
let me be your hero, let me be your shield.
i'll make you alive again to let myself die.
dead souls don't deserve misery, the torture that they took are now mine.
dead souls, i will heal you.
dead souls, i will take your place.
dead souls, i will make you see that i'm the one that deserves misery.

give me your pains, and everything will be fine. you don't deserve your torments because i'm the one who never cries.

release...release... release... everything is fine. smile and be happy, let me be the one to die.

_____
a poem i wrote. one of my favs

nurturing, and suicidal. or actually more sacrificial than suicidal.

wuts your translation?
 

Posts in this topic
aznlyka   REPLACEMENT   Jun 9 2005, 01:09 AM
ItzOnlySydney   "sick love song" that's exactly what...   Jun 9 2005, 01:56 AM
aznlyka   thank you.   Jun 9 2005, 02:37 PM
def_gn   me likes it too   Jun 9 2005, 04:45 PM
aznlyka   thanks for the comment   Jun 10 2005, 04:21 PM


Reply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: