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 Jun 10 2005, 12:43 AM
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a rather cliche poem, but i couldn't help myself...just some random writing i did today. but yeah...its not that great but i haven't shared much lately so i just felt like posting...bleh.
Routine Early morning Lids flutter open Another day begun again Arrive at school Sit through class Learning, sleeping, doodling Simple tasks Done while half asleep Boring duties continue on Laughs with friends Smiles ‘tween classes All seems normal as can be Brief sparks of happiness Through all the drudge Before the school day’s over again Drive all the way home More pointless activities Just before falling back into bed Now all’s let out The tears flow on Another day gone quietly by. |
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Jun 10 2005, 12:47 AM
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 that heaven is overrated  Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
That is 100% true and relatable. I like the simple style of writing. I like it a lot.
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Jun 10 2005, 04:17 AM
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yes simple but true =). Steph, you're so talented!!
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Jun 10 2005, 10:17 PM
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That's very good for something so simple! well done!
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