Help Her Up |
Help Her Up |
May 26 2005, 06:29 PM
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I made a little poem/story.. It's kinda real, except for a certain part. This is old, I just haven't shown it to anybody... We're talking Sixth Grade old.. I'm surprised I even found it..
__________________________________ ____ ___ __ _ Every Day, I see her. She Makes me. Smile. She Makes me. Debate. She Makes me. Laugh. She Makes Me Wonder. Especially when she dances. She doesn't know how to dance. But I don't tell her that. It's not like me, to be the kind to break an innocent perception. But I keep things to myself. When She Rides her Bike. I watch. When She Rides her Bike. I watch. Again. When She Rides her Bike, and Falls Off, I watch, and laugh. But Then Think.. Why does she fall, if she has been on a bike since she was a kid? I guess it's weird. So.. I still watch her. I'm developing something. For Her, Of Course... But Why? And Why Am I So Quiet About it? I can't talk to her about it... As if she were my friend... Anyway. I'll just watch and watch, to my heart's content. I'm looking for that night. Which night? The night to tell her how I feel. Not The Day I see Her, But The Night. The Night I see Her. That's when she'll know. And Everytime she might fall off that bike.. I'll be there to help her up. __________________________________ ____ ___ __ _ PLEASE Comment.. Nobody EVER does.. |
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d0nchikit0 Help Her Up May 26 2005, 06:29 PM
danishcookiez Hey, not bad at all for sixth grade. It's cut... May 26 2005, 08:54 PM
xSWEETxCANDiix Lol good for sixth grade. Haha I liked it. It was ... May 26 2005, 09:51 PM
d0nchikit0 Thanks... It was actually based a *little* on some... May 28 2005, 01:18 PM
emazing It's a wonderful poem, even though it was writ... May 30 2005, 10:19 PM
ItzOnlySydney wow. you had great talent even in sixth grade. =) Jun 4 2005, 02:16 AM
def_gn yes you should try writing one now :) Jun 4 2005, 01:37 PM
b0st0ngrl Good job, especially for 6th grade! :D It... Jun 4 2005, 01:40 PM
yukichan awww..the poem is so cute!lol.. Jun 4 2005, 05:24 PM
Kathleen Haha that really sums up sixth grade crushes. Or a... Jun 6 2005, 01:01 PM![]() ![]() |