Untitled--Kait's Poem..., My poem |
 May 28 2005, 09:09 PM
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My dreams are laced with him
And its murder to my heart Every morning is a cold relief And every night I'm torn apart It's like a process of withdrawal With the pain is included too And even though I know I shouldn't be I'm still drawn to you... ---What do you think? I'm not sure if it is good or....realllllly bad....please be honest! 
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xKait13x Untitled--Kait's Poem... May 28 2005, 09:09 PM
moorepocket it's really good. i think it would be more goo... May 28 2005, 09:56 PM  |
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