the way u make me feel..., any good? |
 May 30 2005, 12:57 AM
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what happened to those days?
they went by so fast when just one hug from u made me wish the feeling would last those lips on mine your breath on my face you whispered in my ear and everything melted away you made me feel safe like i could spend eternity in your arms felt just like heaven on earth boy so won't you hug me once again? - the first poem ive ever written  tell me what u think. plz && thank youz |
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May 30 2005, 11:44 AM
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i love it cuz i can relate.
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May 30 2005, 02:16 PM
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and its nice and simple! well done
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