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untitled, an untitled poem
leifiram
post May 29 2005, 01:38 PM
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Copyright to me. Lol.


It's just difficult to move on,
Reminiscing the good and bad,
The times of friendship we have had,
Those memories forever gone.

Times we have spent without regret,
The moments we thought that would last,
The ones we will never forget
Are missing now, lost in the past.

For this love was not forever,
We just were never meant to be,
Together again is never,
But finally, you and I are free.


Constructive criticism is welcome. It's dedicated to a few friends of mine whose relationships haven't worked out quite well. It's a pretty amateur poem, and I hope I'll improve soon enough. I'll be writing more like these. Thanks.
 

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leifiram   untitled   May 29 2005, 01:38 PM
yukichan   wow its good..i like it..good job!   May 30 2005, 03:16 AM
leifiram   Thanks nekochan1018. I'll probably move on t...   May 30 2005, 09:00 AM
d0nchikit0   It's good but it sounds like a Simple Plan son...   May 30 2005, 10:13 AM


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