Life for me is like a pair of sheos, its a poem! |
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 May 22 2005, 11:15 PM
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 JULiiANA FAYE.  Group: Member Posts: 460 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,749  |
Well cuz, I'll tell you
life for me is like shoes you get dirt stains and grass stains, also dog poop stains, and broken heels too used everyday,seems like it never goes my way its been forever going different places and destinations there will be smooth grounds, bumpy grounds, and sometimes wet ones too with no umbrella so cuz,dont let yourself down keep your shoes in good condition it might be tough but dont trip for Im still surviving my shoes are still clean life is just like a pair of shoes Thats a poem my friend sharon wrote since shes not a member on cb i told her that i could post her poem in here so that u can tell her what u think just say what u think and i'll tell her |
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May 23 2005, 05:35 PM
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 Change Gon Come Group: Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,822 |
i like it!
the kiddy aspect thingy makes me <3 it so. |
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May 23 2005, 05:35 PM
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Change Gon Come Group: Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,822 |
>_< double post..
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May 24 2005, 04:10 AM
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yes i <33 the childish aspect of it but i love the "there will smoothe ground bumpy grounds and even wet one too" part =)
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May 25 2005, 09:24 PM
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 What a hypocrite. Group: Member Posts: 2,754 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,150 |
It's such a melancholy poem; made me sniffle a bit. :) But it's a really heartfelt poem, I really like it.
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