ELECTION SPEECH!, C.O.P. commissioner of publicity Options

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anyone.. here's my speech

Good morning student and faculty members. My name is Paulo Llanes and I’m running for Commissioner of Publicity. I think I’ll be a perfect for this position because I believe I can bring a difference to the announcement you hear every morning. I will try to give everyone prefect and clear announcement everyday. I will promise you guys not to fool around every morning and give pure announcement. I will make sure the bulletin boards in multiuse room are updated and neatly presented. I will also make sure to put up sign in time to each classrooms, library, and teacher’s room in time and remove them immediately after activities. I’ll make sure to promote activities through out the school year and participates in all spirit activities. I will check with the newspaper editor to make sure there is a photographer covering all spirit activities and dances for the Rivera Review. I promise to everyone to make and supervise posters for upcoming event, demonstrate appropriate behavior all the times and treat the school and all people with respect. SO VOTE FOR ME! PAULO LLANES COMMISSIONER OF PUBLICITY CLASS OF 06!

im looking for ideas to make it more better.!