undeniable, another poem by me. Options

[*stephinika*]

i got writing again today, and i actually kinda worked hard on this one, editing and whatnot. i usually just write and i get what i get, so i like this one. i put effort into it, at least more than i usually do. so constructive criticism please and thank you.

Undeniable

Shivers tingle down the length of her spine
As his hand brushes the small of her back
With a stroke as light as a feather
His fingers trail to her side, tickling her along the way
A slight giggle escaping her dainty lips
Before she has a chance to contain it
A comfortable silence soon follows
As step after step is taken
The space in-between them gradually dwindles
Until they come together, fitting so undeniably well
A mere instant later, they find themselves alone
And his penetrating eyes draw immediately to hers
Letting his emotions of desire come through utterly shamelessly
At the intimate moment that’s arisen
A sexy, endearing smile emerges across his features
Pulling her close to him, their bodies align together
Nothing but the sounds of their breath fill the silence
Until the beating of their hearts seems to grow louder
His sweet touch on her skin seduces her very soul
Her passion, a growing and ever burning fire within
As his tender caresses sweep over her voluptuous self
Feelings of lust and love taking over all at once
The mutual attraction breaking free of its inhibitions
They are but two pieces of a perfectly simple yet complex puzzle
That correspond unbelievably well with each other as they join as one
It’s a fantasy come to life
As the idea of what’s happening dances in their minds
The very thought intoxicates them both
The alluring look on her face invites him yet even closer
The pull of temptation finally overcoming
As the intrigue of one another suddenly is in control
The provocative truth becoming undeniable.