RAP BY ME, i'm back!! -kangsta |
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 Apr 25 2005, 05:42 PM
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I'm a superstar with pimp hands
i shoot fast back 2 back like rubba bands kangsta is the way to be cuz that's the only way you can see u see me on my white tee |
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Apr 25 2005, 05:44 PM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 1,732 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 119,327 |
you lost me with the last two lines =/
kind of... short... hibyekthx |
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Apr 25 2005, 07:16 PM
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 Change Gon Come Group: Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,822 |
Stop trying to be so damn HARD!
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Apr 25 2005, 07:19 PM
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 high hopes for the cutter Group: Member Posts: 128 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 127,714 |
*points and laughs* "kangsta is the way to be"
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Apr 25 2005, 07:54 PM
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Its not bad. At least you didn't copy and paste
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Apr 25 2005, 08:14 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
Hmm? Um, I'm having trouble understanding that. =\ Come again..?
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Apr 25 2005, 08:19 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 893 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,217 |
Jason...just stop...we've already told you you look like a poser every time you do this...why keep making yourself suffer D:
It's sort of short, but like the dude above me said, at least you didn't copy and paste. I don't get the "u see me on my white tee" part. ._. |
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Apr 25 2005, 11:15 PM
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 dakishimetainoni... Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,322 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,318 |
oh jason...how i wish you listened to my reply...
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Apr 26 2005, 09:47 AM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
Jason, Jason, Jason. the word Kangsta is so lame. it's asian people trying to be black people trying to be italian people trying to be irish. It's just not going to happen so all of you people go back to your day job.
QUOTE marriage is a commitment between two lovers, it doesn't matter whoever they may be or whatever gender they just happen to be Marriage is a vow taken before God or spiritual leader. Nearly every mainstream religion condemns that perversion. Just stay common law. You can make your commitments outside of that law. You're already making habits outside of the church of which the law was based. We still love you anyway, but Don't pretend to know what a word means when you obviously don't/don't want to. |
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Apr 26 2005, 08:36 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
you killed the song with the last line -_-
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Apr 26 2005, 08:38 PM
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What is up with you and the word "kangsta"?
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Apr 26 2005, 08:40 PM
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 Take advantage of me. Group: Member Posts: 912 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,792 |
Umm the 1st two lines were okay but umm you got a little bit stereotypical with the last few...you`re getting kind of better I guess..but u still SUCK.
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Apr 26 2005, 08:52 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 726 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 95,137 |
i thought it was sort of okay, but the last line ruined everything. haha.
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Apr 27 2005, 07:30 PM
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 PHIL ˝ Group: Member Posts: 2,663 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,982 |
no no no dont tell him to stop guys. i love seeing how foolish he's making himself look. But in a way im kinda amazed that he doesnt give a shiznat about what every one says and believes on what he want to be...a kangsta. good job Jason.
-Phil- |
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Apr 27 2005, 07:39 PM
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</3 Group: Member Posts: 346 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 84,729 |
Jason...Jason ..Jason
 You try too hard.
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Apr 27 2005, 09:10 PM
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 t3h koolest guy in cB Group: Member Posts: 2,194 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 513 |
sounds like a riddle.
nice try... but.. try, try again... |
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Apr 28 2005, 03:58 PM
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 Residential Crazy Child Group: Member Posts: 934 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,897 |
Those last few lines confused me.
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Apr 28 2005, 04:00 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,746 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 17,125 |
Pimp.... hands? What?
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Apr 28 2005, 04:07 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
why did you inculde a line about your t-shirt? that was utterly meaning less
and you're tweleve, please dnt have pimp hands. its icky. other than that, not bad, and at least it was original, so kudo for that |
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Apr 28 2005, 10:10 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 913 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 101,212 |
Ummmmm, nice try...?
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Apr 28 2005, 10:12 PM
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 Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
Damn kid, you are hopeless
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Apr 28 2005, 11:51 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
ah....ah.....ah.......
ok people...atleast he submitted an original rap, and even tho all he gets is mostly negative feedback with no constructive criticisms with a big "YOU SUCK" written in their posts, atleast he gets right back up and still writes. And for that, i really admire him. Cuz i don't know alot of people that would do that. |
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Apr 29 2005, 02:38 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow..this topic has a lot of replies..lol..
sigh..keep on trying..u'll eventually do better.. |
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Apr 29 2005, 03:11 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
I actually thought this was okay. Except for the last line. It made me laugh because it made absolutely no sense. It's good to keep it short for now. When you can write, you can make your raps longer and reduce the chance of making a bad line and getting negative feedback.
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Apr 29 2005, 11:33 PM
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Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
he doesnt respond to good feedback so screw him. ha ha ha
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