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 Apr 30 2005, 10:05 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051  |
New layout. I need some serious critique on this one. Be as nitpicky as you want. I'm going to submit this to places to try to get hosted, so please. I need some good critique.
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Apr 30 2005, 10:26 PM
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yerp! Group: Member Posts: 3,489 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,454 |
I really love the whole concept. The colors are great and the vector is awesome. But where are her arms? I think I see a faint line.
 Then again, if it was too bold, that'd look weird.Otherwise, 10/10. |
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Apr 30 2005, 10:29 PM
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Tu es laid. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,913 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 106,675 |
i love the vector but I'm not feeling the orange on the shirt.. but i like her with no arms.. looks great just don't like the orange on the shirt. good job!
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Apr 30 2005, 10:31 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 254 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,811 |
I love the image but It's weird how it's cut off at the bottom with just paint blots. The paint blots on the shirt don't even look like it was placed on the shirt though. Ehh the rest is really plain too. Something could be done to the headers and the dates.
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May 1 2005, 12:32 AM
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UberForumNewb Group: Member Posts: 36 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,032 |
I like it, I am doing an xanga similar to that idea for my girlfriend,
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May 1 2005, 05:39 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
the nose seems kind of flat, 2D like, compared to everything else. but it's really good. i hope you get hosted somewhere!
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May 1 2005, 10:28 AM
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awesome job! what graphics program did you use for that?
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May 1 2005, 11:25 AM
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 Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
PSH, of course you'll get hosted somewhere.
Hey, you changed her shirt!! It's still a beautiful vexel. I love it. *steals your talent* 
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May 1 2005, 03:13 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
thats amazing !
OF COURSE YOUR GONNA GET HOSTED! your work and stuff is amazing .. |
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May 1 2005, 05:58 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
[f]eleeza- the arms were supposed to be faint.
 sociallydsoryntd- the paint blots were supposed to make it more interesting. What would you suggest? And personally I hate when dates and headers are fancy, it's takes away from the graphic x__forever- there wasn't much of a nose in the original picture (it was very high contrast) So it was done as in illustration. I'll try to add a few more layers to it. thank you everyone for your input |
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May 1 2005, 07:01 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
Its actually mis-aligned for me. Im using Safari. I like the concept and i like the vector. 10/10
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May 2 2005, 05:05 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
sorry I have actually never heard of safari
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May 2 2005, 06:23 PM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
QUOTE(Gypsy Eyes @ May 2 2005, 6:05 PM) sorry I have actually never heard of safari  Safari is the browser programmed on Macs. |
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May 4 2005, 07:43 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 130 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,559 |
Vector is cute... I don't like the brushes over the shirt, though... There needs to be more green/orange in the entries because when I see the layout first, I'm hit with this lovely green and orange combo, then as i scroll down, all I'm getting is black and white and a little orange, which change into green when I hover the links. I suggest incorporating more of the header's colors into the rest of the layout? The vector is amazing, and that picture of you there is cute!
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May 6 2005, 02:51 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
thanks. I was thinking of adding some more color to the blogs
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May 7 2005, 04:05 AM
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yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
QUOTE(Gypsy Eyes @ May 2 2005, 6:58 AM) [f]eleeza- the arms were supposed to be faint. sociallydsoryntd- the paint blots were supposed to make it more interesting. What would you suggest? And personally I hate when dates and headers are fancy, it's takes away from the graphic x__forever- there wasn't much of a nose in the original picture (it was very high contrast) So it was done as in illustration. I'll try to add a few more layers to it. thank you everyone for your input ahh, ok i see. i like the paint blots on it. |
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May 8 2005, 12:41 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
thank you <3
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