untitled..., about a girl Options

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This person I know, who is a girl;
So beautiful, when we meet love unfurls.
She looks just like a work of art;
She's so sweet, always in my heart.
She looks just like an angel from Heaven;
Sweet like the Eucharist, holy unleaven.
This girl makes the world go around;
A girl so rare, nowhere else to be found.
When she talks she brings life to words;
Her voice so heavenly, singing like birds.
Like a little child, so innocent and pure;
If you ever feel sad, she is the cure.
She has a good heart and soul of gold;
She's the kind of girl you just want to hold.
This girl is so pretty and so very fine;
She makes you say, "I wish she was mine."


I'd like comments and constructive criticism..