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 Apr 30 2005, 02:34 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
cant i learn...
two feet firm on nothing race to nothing rat race to nothing piss it away burn it down all fall down Down 20,000 leagues under the see me run see spot run manic depressive giggling with the needle in his arm smile reflected in tears heroin of isolation addiction to friction supersition dont rhyme half rhyme half beat miss a beat - policemen beat down the dreams blazing guns burning sun the victory aint to be won its not a game play the game its not a game play again try again game over |
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Apr 30 2005, 03:09 PM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
Good Lord James, I FREAKIN LOVE IT! I love how crazy it is but still all flows <3<3 Rawr you are amazing.
I want to go to London and visit you |
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Apr 30 2005, 03:20 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
any time you'r ein england, we will meet up, promise
thanks! *blush* |
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| *xcaitlinx* |
Apr 30 2005, 07:59 PM
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kind of confusing...i don't really understand the whole concept
 is it supposed to be a rap? looks like it.
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May 1 2005, 10:08 AM
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Wow James, that really was amazing.
INTENSE and this line was one of the ones that really got me... QUOTE giggling with the needle in his arm You know I hate needles. This line added a bit more to the...psychotic character of the poem. I LOVE IT! |
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| *Weird addiction* |
May 1 2005, 01:01 PM
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*faints*
*wakes up* I LOVE JAMES. *faints again* 20/10 |
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May 1 2005, 01:01 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
QUOTE kind of confusing...i don't really understand the whole concept is it supposed to be a rap? looks like it. no... its about feeling totally insane.... and then realizing you have to laugh, b/c if you dont, you'll die... and you're gonna die anyway, so why be depressed about it. and that there's no point in existing, but we all do it anway. because theres nothing else worth doing |
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May 1 2005, 01:07 PM
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*Glomps James*
 I'm going to rape you this summer. So beware. |
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May 1 2005, 01:51 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
pssh... you cant rape the willing
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May 1 2005, 01:53 PM
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 ¢¾ Wanting it. ¢¾ Group: Member Posts: 2,060 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,234 |
wow. thats fantastic. lol your sucha luva boy. everyone loves you! keep up the writting.
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May 1 2005, 01:54 PM
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QUOTE(Angel_Cece @ May 1 2005, 8:53 PM) wow. thats fantastic. lol your sucha luva boy. everyone loves you! keep up the writting.  NOT everyone loves James...lol... Don't look at me...i adore him... |
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May 1 2005, 02:59 PM
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♥ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,066 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,393 |
Hahahaha. James is, like, THE cB pimp. All the girls go crazy for him. I guess I'd have to be in that group, too.
But anyway, I forgot to mention that James, you're a genius. I absolutely love it. Brilliance. |
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May 1 2005, 07:29 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
I guess I was a bit confused, but it makes more sense now and I've learned to like this poem. ^_^; I like these lines:
'giggling with the needle in his arm smile reflected in tears heroin of isolation' It's a really good combination of so many ideas and how they rhyme. Great job, as always. Yeah.. Appearantly all the girls like you o_O; I think you're pretty kewl. I wish there were more people like you in my town. I NEED TO GO TO ENGLAND >_< |
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| *stephinika* |
May 1 2005, 09:41 PM
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fabulous james, absolutely brilliant. its so unorganized yet so flowing and it just works. i loved it.
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May 1 2005, 09:53 PM
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 it was just my imagination... Group: Member Posts: 36 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 132,842 |
WOW! speachless
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