Let Go |
Let Go |
Apr 15 2005, 07:12 PM
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all my hopes and dreams are shattered,
just because my principles were scattered by overpowering lust and need but, destroying my heart is what i succeed . he never took the time to care he ripped my heart, tear by tear . blow by blow, he tells me of his other hoe . and then he's gone, leaving me alone . the cruetly of love is what i've just been shown . i'm thinking of all the things that he'll never know of all the secrets that i'll never show . i'm sorry i didnt fill his time with lingering kisses and beautiful rhyme, with passionate sex and dirty crime . i tried to fit into his f**king mold but cmon, we're only 15 years old . love is for the ignorant and weak the future's always dark, miserable and bleak . " i love you "'s are always lies born down on with cold, dead eyes . who needs to feel that pain when all is done and slain ? who needs to feel their heart break when they find out that the love was fake ? i'm through with this shit, just wanna let go . let the blood drip down, painful and slow . |
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lidoxangie Let Go Apr 15 2005, 07:12 PM
Kathleen Wow. That was powerful. I liked this quote:
QUOTEi... Apr 15 2005, 07:15 PM
stephinika that was very well written, it had powerful words ... Apr 16 2005, 12:02 AM
yukichan wow..i like the poem...good job.. Apr 16 2005, 12:06 AM
mzkandi wowee this poem flowed with ease. I loved it! Apr 16 2005, 07:09 AM
x3__iGiVEup I followed this poem so easily. I love it =) It ge... Apr 16 2005, 11:02 AM
Paradox of Life Yeah, the flow is good. I like this line:
who nee... Apr 16 2005, 06:02 PM
gladz612 very nicely written.. Apr 21 2005, 11:39 AM
leave.m0i.al0ne i luv how ur poems are so well written, and flow s... Jun 4 2005, 06:52 PM
def_gn I agree with the all of the above. Good job! Jun 5 2005, 03:01 PM![]() ![]() |