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Steed, a poem
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post Apr 21 2005, 08:23 PM
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Steed (04\14/05)

The scent of the car is a familiar one
left lingering when new-car-smell is gone
the smell of gasoline- so familiar
welcoming with open arms
the troubles of behind are now past
and he's driving away
------he's driving away
------------driving away
---------------------away
away from troubles in his life and
away from the people in his life
he runs to his car, a faithful steed
and spurs it on, through the red
to his death and his release.

Steed ©2005 by me.

//EDIT//

i changed 'to his death and release' to 'to his death and his release'. the syllables just didn't seem right...
 

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