My meaningfull rap, wut ya'll thhink?? |
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My meaningfull rap, wut ya'll thhink?? |
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![]() Hello my name is Yula, I'm a baller! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 329 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 125,918 ![]() |
Allright i don't wanna start beef. I am Winternights2 on Forumplasma, im just redirectin my shiz to think what ya'll think of it. My name's John, how's it going? Allrighth ere's a rap i wrote when i was feelin down about the world these days.
Chorus: Stand tall brotha what you sayin we got child support bills that no ones payin this world we livins slowy decreasin law officials get shot will the niggaz creepin look at this we got some good samaratins so im out mutha Fu**** im goin to the Sheraton. Verse 1: It's amazin how can u not picture Brothas dyin in the ghetto creating blood scriptuaz Tryin to get my name known in this game people dyin to try get fortune and fame Gun shots echo the block gon quiet tupacs dead biggie died on the diet This world gon be destroyed by pollution its every man for himself theres no solution droppin a bullet tryin to get revenge while all the rich kids rollin in BMW'z and Mercedes benz we livin in a trailer tryin to hold on to few friends Verse 2: Bush attacked iraq spent billions on the war yet theres still millions starvin and we cant feed the poor i give props to marvin for comforting brothas growin up havin a poor single mother Bein a G makes makin friends easy but you have barley any left cuz there blowin in the wind or lying 6 feet under in the cemetery Grew up watched my dad cry while the police man shot him Livin a losin battle somethin i cant win like growin up a black baby was a sin Verse:3 The voice of god tellin me to be brave but a poor brotha cant help but crave Tryed to afford rent by sellin dope spendin money on ice and gold ropes When i die ill end up in a place with no welfare, livin among people who care Where you can be in peace with your family sittin around smokin under a money tree Grew up family devoloped a drug habit Got one shot at fame gotta grab it Growin up in da ghetto crap stays the same Brothas dead because of cocaine Till then all i can do is keep ma head up, but it seems that pain will never let up so what im gonna do is set up an empire it'll spread like a money wild fire watch it i'll get rich some day while my kids be starvin i got bills to pay well till then all i can do is wait i live a thug life and theres no debate. Yeah i edited it and added some stuff as i worked on it, what do you guys think of it? ![]() [Edit:} [What do you guys think?] © Winternights2 A.K.A John Aight ya'll dont be hatin on me. |
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Nice rapping.
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![]() .bubblicious inspirations. @ www.bubbliciousoul.com ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 466 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,228 ![]() |
nice...
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B-rex ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,689 ![]() |
you know you sound like you bit so much of this off of 'Pac it aint even funny, you even pretty much stole his own lines.
"Till then all i can do is keep ma head up, but it seems that pain will never let up" nice job, you succesfully ripped off "Keep Ya Head Up" by the late Tupac Amaru Shakur. This jus sounds like a rip off of a mixture of Pac songs. |
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B-rex ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,689 ![]() |
see that man in my signature, thats Immortal Technique, the realest ever. You should educate yourself about him and stop listening to mainstream rap.
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![]() highfive. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,301 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,951 ![]() |
^ Don't double post. Use edit button.
![]() Anywho, I thought it was pretty good. It's really cool how you relate the world into your rap. Nice job. ![]() |
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B-rex ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,689 ![]() |
^yeah sorry
but yeah it was a good rap but c'mon any one who has listened to Tupac can see that he bit that rap off of Pac, and i dont think its very original. |
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![]() Hello my name is Yula, I'm a baller! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 329 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 125,918 ![]() |
I admit i used the Keep ya head up lyric just to fill space. But the rest is mine I think. Just so you know, "No Mercy" by Immortal Technique is kinda sucky becuase of the flow. I like the point of no return though.
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B-rex ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,689 ![]() |
well dont expect him to be perfect, tupac has some wack songs too. but your not listening to the right ones, listen to Dance With The Devil, You Never KNow, Harlem Streets, Peruvian Cocaine, Cause Of Death, Bin Laden, The Illest, and a few others
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