Love Hurts Pt. II, This is all Chrissy's fault... |
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 Apr 20 2005, 02:11 AM
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 Holla if ya hate me  Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819  |
That I started writing a continuation of my "Love Hurts" poem I did 2 years ago.. thats right, its all your fault... I blame you
  jkThrough these fast few years I've been reminiscing back Its the first time I couldn't Undestand what we had Was it love? Was it passion? Was it all a waste of time? Now its hate Now its pain Now its all this shit combined I can't force myself too Erase all these memories But when im thinking back I always feeled like we fooled each other Nobody to blame But myself from being blinded Yeah... crying in my sleep Hoping this hurtin' passes by You had me so convinced My world suddenly changed You always made me smile But a smile isn't forever I guess its unpredictable like changing the weather I thought we worked this out Like those other times before But the truth had to reveal We cant live a lie no more Im so young and im still trying To stay true to my heart My dreams have dissappeared... and now my lifes scattered apart.... |
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Apr 20 2005, 02:18 AM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
MY FAULT?! hahaha
So... it's good like your other stuff. There is a good flow to it and it seems to rhyme a bit. I like the very last line the best. Good job again. Anyways, I'm tired 
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Apr 20 2005, 05:16 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
That's from the song. .
"Love hurts" By Chuckie Akenz Ft. Kangel |
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Apr 20 2005, 05:18 PM
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Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
^^I know, but take a look at it closer then listen to the song
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Apr 20 2005, 05:20 PM
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ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
o_o You just took a few lines out, and added like 2 words to a few lines.
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Apr 20 2005, 05:22 PM
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Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
It took you guys long enough to figure it out
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