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 Apr 4 2004, 05:32 PM
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 ilikeyouSofreakingmuch.  Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643  |
Yesterday my friend came over .. and we wrote a little love poem! lol we're amateurz, so it sounds sort of weird:
i didnt think i could love anyone as much as i love you for the sound of ur voice makes all my dreamz come true i need u to be there for me constantly waiting and listenin to my pleas i need u there to cheer me up i need u there to wish me good luck so ... waddaya think? lol |
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Apr 4 2004, 07:35 PM
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 Hi! I'm Dani :) Group: Member Posts: 5,637 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,369 |
nyce poem. its betta than the poems i've written.
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Apr 4 2004, 07:37 PM
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Wish you good luck for what?
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Apr 4 2004, 09:50 PM
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 advanced newbie... S2 Group: Member Posts: 3,504 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 752 |
NICE!
 kinda short tho.  maybe you should make it longer. DUDE i didnt get to see you at the concert!  hahaha 
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Apr 4 2004, 11:27 PM
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 doot doot doot Group: Member Posts: 1,803 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,954 |
wow very nice
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Apr 4 2004, 11:47 PM
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 Retired Posting Whore Group: Member Posts: 699 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,911 |
For future reference...Poems don't have to ryhme...But it was nicely done.
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Apr 5 2004, 12:17 AM
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ilikeyouSofreakingmuch. Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643 |
To xjjajeengx ... I THINK I saw you but i wasn't sure!! What chair are you??
BTW, thanks for your comments about the poem! |
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Apr 5 2004, 01:06 PM
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 x mar muffins *yuuuum Group: Member Posts: 874 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,620 |
nice poem
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Apr 8 2004, 06:24 PM
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Nice poem.
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Apr 9 2004, 12:33 AM
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There should be more poem threads....I like poems..SHORT POEMS...Nothing more than 10 lines...Otherwise i won't read it
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Apr 9 2004, 01:12 AM
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 LuShuZxLaNa Group: Member Posts: 606 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,854 |
QUOTE(LQ_Darksoul @ Apr 8 2004, 10:33 PM) There should be more poem threads....I like poems..SHORT POEMS...Nothing more than 10 lines...Otherwise i won't read it short poems. heh. why won't you read long poems? |
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Apr 9 2004, 01:18 AM
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QUOTE short poems. heh. why won't you read long poems? Well elongated tonge girl, I don't like long poems because my attention span is so low that mostly I get bored with something then just leave it alone. It happens so freq *walks away from the computer to chase a fly* |
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Apr 9 2004, 02:17 PM
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LuShuZxLaNa Group: Member Posts: 606 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,854 |
QUOTE(LQ_Darksoul @ Apr 8 2004, 11:18 PM) Well elongated tonge girl, I don't like long poems because my attention span is so low that mostly I get bored with something then just leave it alone. It happens so freq *walks away from the computer to chase a fly* haha. anyways okay so.... its not a bad thing to have a elongated tongue. i enjoy it. A LOT. anyways, so... have you ever liked any long poems at all? i mean what if the poems has lot of lines, but only contained like 3 or 4 words per line? |
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Apr 9 2004, 05:25 PM
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YEs...I like your elongated tongue... I enjoy lots of poems.. English lit for poetry was like my favorite college class... But I really just couldn't sit and read poems forever n ever...I could read them all day if I were jogging on a tread or somethin ....
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Apr 10 2004, 12:03 AM
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haha nice poem
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