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 Apr 17 2005, 05:09 PM
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 dripping destruction  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929  |
04|07|05 : Drops
You see -- these drops they fall upon your feet are they tears-- from your eyes? or blood from your heart I feel. These drops falling to the ground and as the puddles from I wonder if these drops of sadness from your eye these drops of passion from your heart if, to stop them, you do try or from them do you willingly part I feel these drops upon my hands I look into your eyes and was within them more pain and sadness than one body could hold. and these drops still fall. drops ©2005 by me becuase people apparently are intimidated by large collections of poems. |
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Apr 17 2005, 05:23 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
wow. I really really like that. O_O
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| *stephinika* |
Apr 18 2005, 12:27 AM
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i loved it. well written and it created such an image in my mind. amazing job.
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