The Lonely Child, a poem |
The Lonely Child, a poem |
Apr 21 2005, 08:06 PM
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B-rex ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,689 |
theres a kid at my school that is just like this
Broken is the heart of the lonely child Solid on the surface, tender and mild Fallin to pieces inside, fallin apart bless this lonely child with his lonely heart The deepest of sadness, lurks behinds his eyes Hides behind his fake smile, and little white lies And keeps a brave face, and his world falls apart Bless this lonely child with his lonely heart Bullied, beaten, and teased by all of his peers His everyday reality, is our deepest of fears Outcasted at school, his family fallin apart Bless this lonely child with his lonely heart Hard to get up in the morning, why should he try? No reasons to live, gives him more reasons to die The world doesnt know, hes irrevirsably scarred Bless this lonely child, with his lonely heart Wallowing in pity, drowning in sorrow Crying in bed, awaiting tommorow For another day worthless living to partake Bless this lonely child, whos ready to break He's only happy, as he's dreaming away Oblivious to the torture, he endured that day A smile spreads, as he pictures life without sorrow Bless this lonely child, who dreams of a better tommorow! He's tired of praying, to God all in vain He slits open his wrists, and lets out the pain A sick twisted smile, curls onto his face Whats wrong with the lonely child, who cant find his place? Every single tear he ever shed He replaces it with blood--and so he bled So He layed dying, in a pool of crimson hate It was his own doing, not a matter of fate The blood flowed freely, as his pain shows He feels dizzy, as his breathing slows He took his last agonizing breath, and closed his eyes And was cleansed of the hate and the lies He Layed Dead, Still With A Sick Smile On His Face Finally at Peace, Bless This Lonely Child, Who Now Found His Place |
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SoManyTearz The Lonely Child Apr 21 2005, 08:06 PM
wounded that was, like, wow. Amazing. You're really ta... Apr 21 2005, 08:08 PM
SoManyTearz thank you very much. i appreciate it, anyone else? Apr 21 2005, 08:11 PM
gladz612 wow... this is awsome... Apr 21 2005, 11:33 PM
SoManyTearz thank you very much i do try hard when it comes to... Apr 22 2005, 12:18 AM
x3__iGiVEup WOW; that's amazing. i think maybe you should ... Apr 22 2005, 06:27 PM
MiLKDUD_DOKiE you should have that published. im serious Apr 22 2005, 06:29 PM
DaToNeViEtBoI916 I like it a lot. Powerful. The repetition was a ... Apr 22 2005, 06:36 PM
skateforfree i really like it
its one of the bst ive heard Apr 22 2005, 09:50 PM
agirlnamed_aly Wow. Just wow.
That was really powerful. Like DaT... Apr 23 2005, 01:43 AM
pingpang_0811 QUOTEThe deepest of sadness, lurks behinds his eye... Apr 23 2005, 08:59 AM
xbr0kensmil3 omg.. that was amazing. i love it. Apr 23 2005, 12:36 PM
stephinika wonderful. it was so powerful and emotional with t... Apr 23 2005, 04:46 PM
Spiritual Winged Aura omg, he killed himself ? the ending was interestin... Apr 23 2005, 06:07 PM
yukichan wow...
i really like it..
its so sad..
u should ge... Apr 23 2005, 08:46 PM
IamRad thats freaking good.. keep up the good work Apr 23 2005, 09:29 PM
SoManyTearz thank you so much everyone, really i appreciate it... Apr 23 2005, 09:44 PM
toodlepops. That's awesome, you obviously have some talent... Apr 25 2005, 12:23 AM
nightmare4taki Wow all I have to say is splendid. Honestly I must... Apr 25 2005, 05:16 PM
Sweet_Kiwi1992 I think the reason the story is so good is because... Apr 26 2005, 02:04 PM
pinayprincess OH SH*T! -- thats really sad/depressing --- go... Apr 26 2005, 05:53 PM![]() ![]() |