Hard Times |
 Apr 15 2005, 05:39 PM
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 Do you miss your little girl?  Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851  |
Hey. I wrote this during Biology today. I hope that you like it.
Hard Times I'm not too sure where I'm going, But I know where I've been. I'm not too sure that I like that, For I fear that I have sinned. Who I am is who I'm not, It all seems so surreal. Who I was was a danger to all, Back when I couldn't feel. My eyes shut in a final warning, My energy is fading fast. This time I don't mind too much, The hard times have passed. |
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| *Kathleen* |
Apr 15 2005, 07:16 PM
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Haha writing in class is fun!
 Hehe. I like it, though. Great job.
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Apr 15 2005, 07:46 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
Class sucks. We did nothing in school, except for me taking a quiz in algebra. Every other class turned into study hall. -yawn- so boring.
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| *xcaitlinx* |
Apr 15 2005, 11:02 PM
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i really like it! 2 thumbs up for sure.
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Apr 16 2005, 12:22 PM
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 i <3 peter Group: Member Posts: 744 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 125,986 |
wow! thats really good.
 i wish i could write that well!
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Apr 16 2005, 01:41 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
thanks. :)
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Apr 16 2005, 01:41 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
thanks. :)
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Apr 16 2005, 03:15 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
I like the ending....good job..
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Apr 16 2005, 07:02 PM
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 former member Group: Member Posts: 706 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,339 |
 bravo
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Apr 16 2005, 07:59 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
Touche. I like it, it starts off like that old song, and then you take it from there to you're own place.
I remember writing things in biology... but then one time someone grab something I wrote for one of those alternate perspective kicks I was on and told everyone I was a weirdo....... So now when I write in class it's on my palm.. that way, when someone looks over I can to a 180 and be looking at my schedule |
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Apr 16 2005, 11:06 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
what old song? -blink-
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