i got a medal for my poem! |
 Apr 24 2005, 01:15 PM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
Violet myrtle evergreens,
Marry daytime skies, As satin moods and siren soothes Thrive on rum and rye Laurels grace their presence With lace upon their reef, While placed with nowhere of sense; Marred by other leaves Despite the feud of jealousy It’s all a grand of time With a dancing hand and ditty, While drinking down a lime The thistledown of thistles Make up the gowns of silk; While Murmuring sweet nothings, Imbibing honeysuckle’s milk As night begins to lay; Only the Laurels noticed, Daytime start to slip away, As the Myrtles stayed unnoticed i entered this poem in a contest online a while ago and today in the mail i got a medal for it lol. i asked my mom if she wanted to see it so i logged onto sillygoth.com and showed her. she was like "'YOU DIDNT WRITE THAT WHAT DOES IMBIBELING MEAN? HMM HMM?" and i told her it was "imbibing" and that it meant drink. then she looked it up in the dictionary, convinced it wasnt a word-when she found it the deffinition said "to drink" lol..looking back on that site i have over 50 poems..my mom said i should publish a poetry book xD i think im gonna do it |
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| *stephinika* |
Apr 24 2005, 01:39 PM
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thats awesome, i really like it. amazing vocabulary and it flows so very nicely.
 and congratulations!
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Apr 24 2005, 01:49 PM
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 insanitys contagious. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,210 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,707 |
Wow , I love that I have a few poems myself that have been nominated to be in a book at poetry.com.
GREAT JOB! |
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| *mzkandi* |
Apr 24 2005, 01:55 PM
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QUOTE(Emmaliev @ Apr 24 2005, 2:49 PM) I have a few poems myself that have been nomiated to be in a book at poetry.com.  I did too, actually two are published on their website and Congrats on the medal. The poem is really good. |
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Apr 24 2005, 02:13 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
whoa, same here, poetry.com is where i got the medal from :)!
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Apr 24 2005, 03:02 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
thats stunning. i love it
amazing.... write MORE lol |
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Apr 24 2005, 04:41 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
I have no idea what that poem means
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Apr 26 2005, 08:58 PM
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 SCHGEB!SCHGEB! Group: Member Posts: 1,786 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,217 |
awesome! congrats
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May 1 2005, 01:57 AM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
thats so sad. the person must be hurt terribly. Really good. the first 6/7 i've ever given.
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May 1 2005, 10:06 PM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
Congratulations, you really deserved it. Its really good! ^^
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May 5 2005, 02:40 PM
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 I can't believe its not "Ryan" Group: Member Posts: 1,981 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,368 |
Good Work Chick.
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| *not_your_average* |
May 6 2005, 09:31 PM
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wait, i heard poetry.com was a scam.
but your poem kicks ass anyway! |
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May 7 2005, 12:58 AM
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I love it!
 I hope to read more of your work.
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| *Kathleen* |
May 7 2005, 05:01 PM
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Wow I can see why you got a medal.
 That's terrific! I love it. The third stanza's my favorite.
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May 7 2005, 05:05 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,682 |
i liked the flow of the poem, and it sounded really deep . `cept i didnt really understand it -_____- heheh
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May 31 2005, 06:25 PM
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 What a hypocrite. Group: Member Posts: 2,754 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,150 |
That's a great poem - where'd you learn to write like that?
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Jun 4 2005, 02:14 AM
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great job i never get madals for mine because outside of cB i am so scared of what people will think that i don't show them my peoms.
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Jun 4 2005, 05:14 PM
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I love you <33333 Group: Member Posts: 2,928 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,404 |
Congrats! Good luck on the poetry book!
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