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lovers loss in a stage of insanity |
Apr 16 2005, 09:48 PM
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it was sorrow
it was hope it was a plea for one small signal that proved she was worthwhile she was losing her mind in stages the first stage was doing weird things and she second stage was not caring anymore because the pain was the only thing in this place that fit her the bottom finally arrived she crashed against it but it brought no sense of closure or understanding she just lay the bottom looking up she knew there must be a very tiny circle of light up there somewhere but just now she couldnt see it. |
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TreesTurnMeOn lovers loss in a stage of insanity Apr 16 2005, 09:48 PM
stephinika beautiful. there's something about your words ... Apr 17 2005, 02:19 AM
TreesTurnMeOn Thank you! ^_^ Apr 17 2005, 10:41 AM
mzkandi Wow, I loved it. If kinda reminds of when a person... Apr 17 2005, 11:10 AM
TreesTurnMeOn Good. That was the effect I was looking for.
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