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 Apr 16 2005, 09:48 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
it was sorrow
it was hope it was a plea for one small signal that proved she was worthwhile she was losing her mind in stages the first stage was doing weird things and she second stage was not caring anymore because the pain was the only thing in this place that fit her the bottom finally arrived she crashed against it but it brought no sense of closure or understanding she just lay the bottom looking up she knew there must be a very tiny circle of light up there somewhere but just now she couldnt see it. |
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| *stephinika* |
Apr 17 2005, 02:19 AM
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beautiful. there's something about your words that just pulled me in...i loved it.
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Apr 17 2005, 10:41 AM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Thank you! ^_^
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| *mzkandi* |
Apr 17 2005, 11:10 AM
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Wow, I loved it. If kinda reminds of when a person hits rock bottom and they lay there looking up for something to hold on to. I can relate. Good job.
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Apr 17 2005, 11:27 AM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Good. That was the effect I was looking for.
And thanks a lot! 
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