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| *islandgirl4eva* |
 Apr 15 2005, 03:24 PM
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Ever since the first day I laid my eyes on you, you had me under your spell. Your long dark lashes and joyously round cheeks, I see them even in my sleep. You've been through so much and come out with a smile. There's so much I'd like to tell you, I hope you have a while.
Your soft scent is the air I like to breathe. When I call your name and you run into my arms, I cry hoping this moment will last forever. I know you have a long, hard road ahead and I want you to know that I'll always be here for you, as you always are for me. When I cry, you ask no questions. My little teddy bear you are. When I've had a hellish day you come to my rescue and put a smile on my face. As we watch your favorite movie...the fact that you always look back at me, expecting me to belt out your favorite song. I look forward to these small, bright moments. You expect nothing from me, nothing except unconditional love, and I'm helpless but to give it. You've done so much for me already. You've saved my soul. I want to thank you. For then, for now, and for times to come. The cartoons you'll want to watch will forever keep me young. The attention you need will forever keep me grounded. The love you give will always keep my heart soft and warm. You've been a blessing, oh brother of mine. Thank you for the tears you let me shed. Thank you for the laughs with me you shared. Thank you for living, for I need you more than you know. I wrote this for my two year old brother Shawn. He's kissed the lips of death three times and come back to me each and every time. It's going to get harder, but no matter how busy I am, I'll drop anything and everything for him. My source of strength and inspiration for life. I love him more than myself. |
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Apr 15 2005, 03:29 PM
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Wow, that has a lot of meaning in it. I knew ferom the minute i started reading it that it was about your little brother. He is truly blessed.
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Apr 15 2005, 05:23 PM
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QUOTE He's kissed the lips of death three times What happened?
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Apr 15 2005, 05:29 PM
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The flow of his blood was not going in the right direction. It wasn't being oxygenated and his heart stopped pumping. Breathing ceased. My mom was still recovering from the c-section in the hospital and I helped take care of her. We heard "CODE PINK" yelled over the PA system three times and people running down the maternity ward. I peeked into the hall way and they were reviving him with a defribbilator. I cried so hard, and so did my mom.
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Apr 15 2005, 05:35 PM
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I just want to wrap you and your brother up in a big hug.
This piece of writing made me real emotional. With your use of imagery words and similes, it made me feel like I was experiencing what you were at that moment. |
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Apr 15 2005, 05:37 PM
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 Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
wow.
 that's sad about your brother, I hope that he has a long life. This was a nice thing that you wrote for him.
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| *Kathleen* |
Apr 15 2005, 07:18 PM
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Aww. Wow. That was beautifully written, and I truly hope he gets better soon.
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Apr 15 2005, 07:20 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
That was beautiful, Naomi.
Excellent work, I love how descriptive you are! I hope everything is alright with your brother, by the way. Wonderful job, keep it up! :] |
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| *mzkandi* |
Apr 15 2005, 07:22 PM
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Wow I am touched...*hug*
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Apr 15 2005, 07:26 PM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
Naomi dear, it's beautiful. I absolutely love it! I can feel how much you really do love and care for Shawn. So cute, so precious! Great piece of writing once again and remember those pictures!
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Apr 15 2005, 10:02 PM
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Thank you everyone. He's doing fine at the moment. With everything that's happened I've learned to take each day with him and apreciate it. He's taught me so much...humilty, tolerance, and how something so innocent and unknowing can change a life.
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| *stephinika* |
Apr 16 2005, 12:04 AM
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wow, naomi, that was amazing...i can feel the emotions in your words and the love for your brother. what a story.
glad to hear he's okay right now though. beautifully written.
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Apr 16 2005, 03:20 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow thats so sad..
hope he recovers soon... |
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Apr 17 2005, 09:20 AM
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Thank you everyone. He is okay for now. He has a hemivertibrae, in which his spine is bending at quite an angle. It isn't to severe yet, but if it gets any worse he will have to have surgery on it. I'm so scared, so every moment I spend with him is precious.
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