Its a lil' laker rap I made, Don't worry, this ones mine.. |
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 Apr 22 2005, 12:45 AM
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 Holla if ya hate me  Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819  |
I'm taking a break of trying to get warned... its hard work
 Reason for posting this: XInitialDPnoiX (11:21:40 PM): The reason I think you wouldn't like it, is because its a lil' rap I made about my team the Lakers M1SSxCHR1SSY (11:22:22 PM): Post it Rik XInitialDPnoiX (11:22:39 PM): why? M1SSxCHR1SSY (11:22:46 PM): Because I say so. XInitialDPnoiX (11:23:08 PM):  ok...Now onto my rap about my team, the Lakers Kobe and Shaq's love was faded. Then they both got mad and Shaq got traded. Dr. Buss just thought Shaq was washed up old and tired. Then Phil Jackson got fired. Then I couldn't belive my three-peat Lakers started to leave. Malone tried to hit on Kobe's wife at the lakers game. Have you seen such a veteran seem like a damn lame? Damn this whole season was nothing but chaos. Damn, now I sit here watching them not even make the playoffs. The media taking cheap shots at Kobe but it only makes him higher. Like he said, all these haters just fuel the fire. I guess 'till now he actually realizes a team by yourself is hard to manage. But he's down to take on this challenge Yo right now theres a frown on his face But dont worry Laker fans, there will be better days. Listen, much love to my idol.. I'm just hoping he will help bring back the title to L.A. some day |
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Apr 22 2005, 01:42 AM
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B-rex Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,689 |
it wasnt all that good, mostly simple rhymes. not too new or creative, flow wasnt so hot. 5/10
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Apr 22 2005, 01:44 AM
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thats more like a grade school poem... oh shit you rhymed tired with fired... try expierementing with complex rhyme schemes and multi sylabble rhyming
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Apr 22 2005, 01:54 AM
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B-rex Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,689 |
yeah no offense it kinda sounded like some stuff from 3rd graders
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Apr 22 2005, 02:48 PM
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Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
Hahahahahahah... its all good. This type of stuff ain't my style. So when I put down a rap don't expect anything good
 
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Apr 23 2005, 12:33 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
Well, I liked it
 I'm a Laker fan as well..and I'm disappointed that they didn't make the playoffs -.- but anyways, nice Laker rap
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