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wounded
post Mar 28 2005, 07:45 PM
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Do you miss your little girl?
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Wait

You want me to wait for you,
But I can't wait forever.
You ask me when is a good time,
My cry is, "The day after never!"

Forever and a day passes,
Still I am not yet yours.
People pass me by,
Asking "What are you waiting for?"

No one understands this life,
Or why I choose it to hate.
People don't understand what it's like,
To be told just to wait.

I'm sick of waiting,
I've done my share of crying.
I'm giving up this dream,
Get on with my life or die trying.

If you loved me like you said,
I wouldn't be this far gone.
If you needed me truly,
Waiting wouldn't feel so wrong.

I need you to wait for me,
I've waited my whole life for you.
Do you understand now?
To your own word are you true?

Never expect someone to wait forever,
It hurts too much in the end.
You've got to let them go,
Your heart will be forever stuck on mend.
 

Posts in this topic
wounded   Wait   Mar 28 2005, 07:45 PM
smilz2dasun   aww.. sounds like what im going through. im sick...   Mar 28 2005, 08:07 PM
wounded   thanks. I <3 the feedback!   Mar 28 2005, 08:08 PM
anqie   that's so sweet. great job   Mar 28 2005, 08:14 PM
yukichan   wow..that was a good poem...good job..   Mar 28 2005, 09:43 PM
wounded   Wow. Thanks. :)   Mar 28 2005, 10:32 PM
No1_2_NoBody13   Thats really good...PROPS   Mar 29 2005, 10:29 PM
wounded   I aim to please. Thanks. :)   Mar 29 2005, 10:37 PM
bby_cutie   Great poem!   Mar 30 2005, 05:54 PM
wounded   thanks. :)   Mar 30 2005, 06:50 PM
stephinika   not bad, good rhyming scheme and overall pretty we...   Mar 31 2005, 07:29 PM
wounded   Thank you for the response.   Mar 31 2005, 07:43 PM


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