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 Mar 28 2005, 07:45 PM
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 Do you miss your little girl?  Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851  |
Wait
You want me to wait for you, But I can't wait forever. You ask me when is a good time, My cry is, "The day after never!" Forever and a day passes, Still I am not yet yours. People pass me by, Asking "What are you waiting for?" No one understands this life, Or why I choose it to hate. People don't understand what it's like, To be told just to wait. I'm sick of waiting, I've done my share of crying. I'm giving up this dream, Get on with my life or die trying. If you loved me like you said, I wouldn't be this far gone. If you needed me truly, Waiting wouldn't feel so wrong. I need you to wait for me, I've waited my whole life for you. Do you understand now? To your own word are you true? Never expect someone to wait forever, It hurts too much in the end. You've got to let them go, Your heart will be forever stuck on mend. |
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Mar 28 2005, 08:07 PM
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 hi, my name is hillary Group: Member Posts: 352 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 76,591 |
aww.. sounds like what im going through.
 im sick of waiting. anyways.. good job with the poem. keep up the good work! 
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Mar 28 2005, 08:08 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
thanks. I <3 the feedback!
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Mar 28 2005, 08:14 PM
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 skaters gonna skate. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,861 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,336 |
that's so sweet. great job
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Mar 28 2005, 09:43 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow..that was a good poem...good job..
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Mar 28 2005, 10:32 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
Wow. Thanks. :)
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Mar 29 2005, 10:29 PM
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 theres no i in slut...but there is a u Group: Member Posts: 208 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 86,257 |
Thats really good...PROPS
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Mar 29 2005, 10:37 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
I aim to please. Thanks. :)
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Mar 30 2005, 05:54 PM
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 Imperfect... Group: Member Posts: 286 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,064 |
Great poem!
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Mar 30 2005, 06:50 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
thanks. :)
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Mar 31 2005, 07:29 PM
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not bad, good rhyming scheme and overall pretty well written.
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Mar 31 2005, 07:43 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
Thank you for the response.
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