Regret, a short poem |
 Mar 23 2005, 07:04 PM
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Regret
On and on and on again, These whispers seem to have no end. The heat and pain are stealing me, taking me underneath. They never tell me, what's to be, I can't imagine what's to see. Covered by lies I shall remain, buried in this dry salty plain. Upon my face and in my hands, the blood of lovers come and gone. On and on and on again, These whispers seem to have no end. TxT copyright©2005 BeyezB |
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Mar 23 2005, 07:05 PM
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Tu es laid. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,913 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 106,675 |
wow i like.. it has a great message to all those people who have made a horrible mistake and cant turn back.
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Mar 23 2005, 07:47 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow..that was good...good job..
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Mar 25 2005, 03:22 PM
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QUOTE(azn.peace.maker @ Mar 23 2005, 8:05 PM) wow i like.. it has a great message to all those people who have made a horrible mistake and cant turn back.  ^^^said it perfectly... 
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Mar 25 2005, 03:27 PM
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i <33 it. thatz rly good.
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Mar 25 2005, 10:18 PM
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gRaCiE Group: Member Posts: 350 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 96,997 |
wow...that's really great...simple but powerful n makes you think
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Mar 25 2005, 10:19 PM
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Im feeling this. PROPS
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