Dying Inside, how I feel everyday |
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 Mar 17 2005, 03:55 AM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 297 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 63,338  |
Dying Inside
I scream as I hold my head and close my eyes, Yet everything is quiet, and a look of happiness sweeps my face, Tears start to pour out onto my gray cheeks, I feel myself slipping away, But I still stand here with this fake emotion, And I can't shake it off, it's glued on, like a mask, I try and kick to let this demon go, But I cannot let go... And I'm dying inside. ----- Okay, my first shot at an unrhyming poem... Kinda like a lot of other poems out there. |
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Mar 17 2005, 03:57 AM
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 i feel that way too sometimes. *hugs azn hunnie* i know what your going through
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Mar 17 2005, 04:01 AM
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QUOTE(ItzOnlySydney @ Mar 17 2005, 3:57 AM) i feel that way too sometimes. *hugs azn hunnie* i know what your going through *hugs back* Yeah --; Where every day you have to pretend... and... thanks.  It'll get better sooner or later though.
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Mar 17 2005, 08:45 PM
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aw, feel better..
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Mar 18 2005, 09:03 PM
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I like it, I think we all feel like that sometimes.
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Mar 19 2005, 02:07 AM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
I can relate to your poem. Although it might be similar to others out there, I quite like it. =]
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Mar 19 2005, 02:20 AM
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 ^_^ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,141 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,466 |
You never know what someone is going through and poetry like this is more than a means of ventilation, it's a cry for help and a shot at therapy. At least, that what it is for me.
Good job. |
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Mar 20 2005, 03:53 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 297 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 63,338 |
Thanks, glad you guys like it
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Mar 20 2005, 11:41 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
good job...hope u feel better...
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| *salcha* |
Mar 22 2005, 02:24 AM
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its aiite, i can relate :/
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