Just a short poem, tell me if it sucks.. |
 Mar 14 2005, 02:56 PM
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 <3 Deanna Leigh Irene <3  Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 111,326  |
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shaking and trembling as i uncontrolably bled, you sit there and let me become braindead my body melts into the world of aftermath you just let me fall straight down the wrong path my eyes twitch and my fingers go numb and you let me think i was the one who was dumb my life in your pocket, you threw me away so i had to sit alone at night, nothing to do but pray so now i'm braindead, everything expended and as my life closes, i'm glad that it ended. |
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iwalkbackwards Just a short poem Mar 14 2005, 02:56 PM
racoons > you i really like it, especially the last verse, but i... Mar 14 2005, 03:48 PM tungtwista nice poem! i love the rhymes lol. Mar 14 2005, 03:50 PM Teesa ^yeah, it's really nice and I love the fact th... Mar 17 2005, 08:42 PM CRAZEDindian40 I think it's really good, it's short but i... Mar 18 2005, 09:08 PM DaToNeViEtBoI916 i like it alot deanna! =] Mar 19 2005, 12:19 AM
ItzOnlySydney hmm braindead. iono. but other than that itz great Mar 19 2005, 01:28 AM  |
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