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 Mar 1 2005, 08:52 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
So..I dont know if its a poem or not. I just wrote it in class because it was the only way to keep me from screaming.
I keep smiling even when I'm screaming inside Because these things drive me crazy I have no choice but to hide Force a smile And blink away the tears Im supposed to be strong Supposed to have no fears But I'm finding it so hard Not to frown Im such a strong person Why am I breaking down? But you know Im alright You know Im just the kind of girl That feels so hurt and smiles Though ever collapsing is my world I don't do escuses I don't ask why Its just a breakdown It happens all the time Don't yell in my face Don't EVEN try You wanna help me? Just let me cry Yeah I love you all my life But you don't even know A thing I feel inside Know by the Look in my eye Please....even if its a lie To keep these tears from being cried.. Tell me I'm fine |
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Mar 1 2005, 11:07 PM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
I loved that. I love the emotion. You made it real easy to see through your eyes.
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Mar 1 2005, 11:54 PM
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i loved it. sounds exactly like something i'd say or something...very well done.
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Mar 2 2005, 12:04 AM
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 aNNa BaNaNa >.< Group: Member Posts: 102 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,244 |
*applause* i feel that ALL the time (the feeling like breaking down and having the want of others to just leave you alone and yet sometimes you kinda want them there... and you just want things to be alright)... yah. And how you put it... no other words could be said truer than those... good job!
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Mar 2 2005, 08:00 AM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Eek! Thanks. ^_^
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Mar 2 2005, 03:21 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 109 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,204 |
That's extremely powerful. I really liked that one. There was a lot said in such a short period of time, very well done. Quite enjoyed it and it's very easy to relate to from many many perspectives. Keep it up
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Apr 2 2005, 04:41 AM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 121,252 |
wow girl that such an awesome poem!!!
It's just weird that you just happened to be ispired to write a poem with the EXACT same words as an ashlee simpson song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and post on a forum and call it your own. BAAHAHAHA dumb bitch, if i was gonna scab someone else's material and claim it as my own it would at least be better shit than ashlee simpson. |
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Apr 10 2005, 04:21 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
^I dont see how the relationship between the song&the poem.
WOW; So many people can relate to this. Nicely done |
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