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 Mar 7 2005, 06:31 PM
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Another poem I wrote recently. It is OK..not my best. But I used it for submission to my english teacher for some in school publication thing.
Details Seeping through the cracks Little water droplets collect. Each one damaging the fine oak floor. Collecting and collecting on the side. Emerging as a huge mass that I cannot bear to contain. These details are like a ball of darkness, Slowly forming in my stomach. Tiny factoids bunch together. Squirming in this puddle. Aching to get out and be used. But staying inside forever. In the end, I will only have these details to remember. |
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rockstermonkey Details Mar 7 2005, 06:31 PM
stephinika i'm not sure i quite understand it, but i stil... Mar 7 2005, 09:07 PM rockstermonkey Well, it got accepted for publication Mar 8 2005, 09:29 PM
--{Empty}-- I can only take a stab at what you mean, or rather... Mar 9 2005, 02:24 AM  |
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