clouds, another poem |
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 Mar 8 2005, 06:10 PM
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clouds
the clouds blur and stir my heart is eaten bythe dragon the girl on the rock the scottie dog and the empty peaks of life and white purity and the ultimate battle as shapes tearacross the sky in a haze of the days when everything you feel is reflected in a deep crimson sky |
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| *stephinika* |
Mar 8 2005, 07:11 PM
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not bad james...i love the ending. keep it up.
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