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You, another love poem
korbana05
post Mar 10 2005, 03:40 PM
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aNNa BaNaNa >.<
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You

So many emotions welded within
I cant seem to contain any of it...
I scream out from my heart again and again
but out of your thoughts does it sit.

Tears overflow from my swollen cheeks
Time is passing fast and it wont slow down
I think of you for weeks and weeks
and in my tears i do drown.

Your name is engraved upon my heart
along with a crack right in the middle
for my heart was broken a part
and thats why i start this riddle...

What has two eyes and does not see?
What gets clues but does not understand?
What knows not of me?
What does not grasp my reaching hand?

The answer to all is of course you
and I have nothing more to say
than my feelings for you are true
and it will always remain that way

-aNNa PaZ

-- sorry... that was my first rhyming poem... its much more harder than free verse (which im too used to) so what do you think?
 

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korbana05   You   Mar 10 2005, 03:40 PM
b0st0ngrl   I like it! It's really good :D   Mar 10 2005, 03:45 PM
xtransatlanticismx   it's nice, but don't rearrange words in a ...   Mar 10 2005, 04:16 PM


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