People See Me, Another Poem :) |
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 Mar 1 2005, 10:06 PM
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 Philly Girl 4-life  Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 105,772  |
People see me, people care,
Yet they try to avoid my stare. My family trys, yet not hard enough. They push and push me but, towards what? I don't have a future and don't need one now. My fate is chosen, I don't know how. All I know is what I've been told. That my soul has been taken and sold. People see me, people stare. What they don't know is that I have to care... |
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Mar 1 2005, 10:16 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
hmmm i like it i think its good man goood stuff XD
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Mar 1 2005, 10:30 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Woah. I really really like that. Its simple..but I dont know why I like it so much. Great job!
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Mar 1 2005, 11:01 PM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
QUOTE(TreesTurnMeOn @ Mar 1 2005, 11:30 PM) Woah. I really really like that. Its simple..but I dont know why I like it so much. Great job!  Yeah.. What she said. ^^  lol.
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Mar 1 2005, 11:52 PM
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i like it. simple, but has a good point.
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Mar 3 2005, 12:02 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 109 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,204 |
I like the idea and thought you brought out in that piece, the simplicity makes it easy to understand what you're trying to say along with easily used to relate to the issues in each other person's life. That's the main reason in which I like your piece.
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Mar 3 2005, 10:23 PM
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Philly Girl 4-life Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 105,772 |
Thanks fro replying, im glad you all enjoyed this. I really appreciate the feed back :)
 I wub You all!! |
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Mar 3 2005, 11:02 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Posts: 8,274 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,001 |
10/10 .. i think that's me because no one doesnt knoe me well enough, they think they know what i do, and get the wrong idea from their viewpoint. Yea, people do stare at me constantly .. like i do ..
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Mar 8 2005, 12:45 AM
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Philly Girl 4-life Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 105,772 |
I'm Sorry You feel that way, but you aren't alone. If you ever wanna chat Im here!
and my YIM is potmonkeyjd too! If you like these check out Feed Your Mind |
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