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 Mar 1 2005, 11:28 PM
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 aNNa BaNaNa >.<  Group: Member Posts: 102 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,244  |
I havent written a poem recently... i posted one up of a poem i wrote a long time ago... i guess I'll make on up right now.
one look at you and a flood of memories drown me crumbling what i finally started to build. my heart would beat fast again like raging drums within me and silent tears would flow I could have sworn i gave up on you but no... you are here haunting my thoughts wherever i go. an inner struggle tears me up inside a part wants to run to you and never give up and the other wants to pack my bags ... leaving you. YOU seemed to have moved on, then why is it is so hard for me? so many fish in the sea... and you already caught by another... i should just throw my hook in and hope for the best. if it only were that easy... the only solution is to blind my heart and keep it away from one look at you... -me sorry its not my best... i just dont feel like editing it right now. tell me what you think |
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Mar 1 2005, 11:30 PM
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you're really talented
 yea...that poem is kinda like what's happening to me right now -sigh- 
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Mar 1 2005, 11:39 PM
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aNNa BaNaNa >.< Group: Member Posts: 102 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,244 |
^.^ thank you! yah... i can only do okay when im feeling it... i cant write about something i cant relate to... its harder.
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| *stephinika* |
Mar 1 2005, 11:53 PM
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very emotional...i like it. one thats easy to relate to. well done.
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Mar 2 2005, 12:15 AM
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God, this one really touched me. I've been through this, felt it...still feeling it now. That was fantastic!
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Mar 4 2005, 12:50 AM
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An instance that happens too often, as unfortunate as it is. So easy to see what you're trying to say and feel your words at the same time. Keep on writing
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Mar 4 2005, 02:17 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow that was good...
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| *salcha* |
Mar 4 2005, 03:23 AM
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wow, it's so strong...i can almost reach out and touch it. good job!
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Mar 4 2005, 09:04 PM
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 music lover Group: Member Posts: 469 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 52,999 |
oh gosh .. this poem is really good.
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