Friends Like You, Utter Betrayal |
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Friends Like You, Utter Betrayal |
Mar 6 2005, 05:02 AM
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Friends Like You
It is because of friends like you Individuals such as yourself Each with the unique personalities you have acquired Throughout the days of your lives That have kept me here And apart from Death and the rest who have gone before me As you read through these lines Too so, you have read my life In essence as you read These words of mine I have also shown you my life Entrusting that to you I have just done Pen meeting paper Marks upon it that require much effort Presistance as well to destroy and erase This account of my friendship to you Something I’ll try to never take away As said, it is friends like you that have truly kept me alive Shaping me into the person I’ve become Whether in your eyes it be a creation or an abomination Days spent with you all, my life spent Wishing they’ll never come to an end For the sun to never set And when it has, for night to start over again You’ve taught me so much How true you all are, each being unique Showing me a different side of the world And the different faces of life Revealing to me those who deceive in this life Those who slither their way through life itself For that I thank you all Teaching me so much, making me so much more Furthermore, for keeping me alive Could not have done it otherwise… Could I? |
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| *stephinika* |
Mar 6 2005, 02:21 PM
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powerful. i like it. great ending too...you seem to be quite good with those. i also like how you capitalize Death. adds more to the meaning. also the first person perspective brings more meaning to the words as well. very well done.
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